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We Can TalkNotes by Peter VineyThe first section "On lyrics in general" is expanded from a similar section in an earlier article, but it's especially relevant here.
"We Can Talk" On lyrics in generalRobbie RobertsonI hate having (lyrics on albums) now. I say 'Is my diction so bad?' People piss and moan about it, but I don't like it. When I read other people's lyrics on their sleeves I think they look stupid. If I read the lyrics to some of my favourite songs, they don't mean shit to me. But if I hear 'When A Man Loves A Woman', it is so powerful and emotional. All I want out of any of these songs is the right emotion. I don't give a shit what the lyrics are. Dylan rambled on way too much for my liking. I remember years ago saying to him: 'listen to 'When A Man Loves A Woman'; I like this more than any of the songs we're playing. This is emotional to me; our songs are clever. I don't care for clever. Let's try and get somewhere that has an emotional thing. 1 (The track which Robertson urged Dylan to listen to varies every time he has retold the story - but it's always a soul classic, so we get the idea) Robbie Robertson
You never put the lyrics on the albums. You always have to listen about twenty times to get the words. Richard Manuel No not on the album (Big Pink). But on most of our albums we had them on the sleeve. Ruth Albert Spencer No, no. Richard Manuel Yes, on most of them we did. Ruth Albert Spencer No, honey. Richard Manuel I definitely remember. The lyrics are on there. Ruth Albert Spencer No. They were never written out. You'd just have to figure them out. Richard Manuel Well, then, they gave me phony covers and jackets. 3 Greil Marcus
A tradition, surely. Roy Orbison remembered the words of Mary Lou for Ronnie Hawkins. Ronnie Hawkins
That's the problem with oral history. Ronnie recorded Mary Lou on April 29th 1959. Roy Orbison disbanded The Teen Kings in 1956. Still, Roy recalls the same incident as occurring when he knew Ronnie in Arkansas in 1955: Roy Orbison
Lyric swopping was happening all the time with rock songs. When I was at school, and every kid wanted to be in a group, we'd swop lyrics to Stones songs or Chuck Berry songs. You were never quite sure what the words actually were. Take Memphis, Tennessee. The song sheet says that his uncle took the message and he wrote it on the wall. It doesn't sound like that. Most bands in my area voted for 'the phone boy took the message ?'. I once sweated out the words to Route 66 from a detailed atlas while the Stones version cranked tinnily out of the Dansette behind me - and looking back I made a few mistakes even with the atlas. Most British groups just used to mouth meaningless noises - 'See a Murillo, gallop to Mexico, and half of Arizona, don't forget to phone ya, Winston, dumadumdum, Saint Bernadine, oh, what you?' (or crap to that effect). Chuck Berry sang 'Jack, take my way', everybody else, including Mick Jagger, sang 'Just take my way'. And Berry's words were an example of great clarity compared to Little Richard. Robbie is quite serious when he says he believes lyrics should be part-heard, part-understood. That's the difference between a song and a poem. Good rock is not poetry set to music (however widely you want to define poetry). Rock is something else. Few great songs are transparent in meaning. Many of the best are not-quite-heard. The lyrics throughout Big Pink are considerably less transparent and more fragmented than those on their second album, but this is nothing that needs apologizing for. I've enjoyed the music (and the words) on Big Pink for years without feeling any great compulsion to see them written out, or to puzzle out detailed meanings. The music gives a mood, and the words heighten and enhance it. We Can TalkLevon HelmIt's a funny song that really captures the way we spoke to one another; lots of outrageous rhymes and corny puns. Richard just got up one morning - or afternoon - sat down at the piano, and started playing this gospel song with its famous line: "But I'd rather be burned up in Canada than to freeze here in the South."7 This is a perfect opener for side two, in contrast to Tears of Rage on side one, and another Manuel song. Unlike his other compositions, this is tailor made for the ensemble rather than for a lead vocal by himself. The way the lyrics are swopped between singers, and get lost in the general hurly-burly previews what happens on the next track but one, Chest Fever. Rick and Richard are close in to the mics, Levon appears to be around / across / along the hall. The distance between the perceived positions is accentuated on the remasters. The lines are exchanged, finished for each other, then everything suddenly blends together in a line that sums up their finest vocal work:
Manuel's writing here is as dense, complex and enigmatic as Robertson's. We Can Talk defies explanation, yet bursts from the lyrics imprint themselves in the mind:
Did you ever milk a cow? I had the chance one day but I was all dressed up for Sunday ? I'd rather be burned in Canada than to freeze here in the South! We've got to find a sharper blade or have a new one made?
The song is a series of snatches of conversations; perhaps it's emphasising the eventual cameradie among the members of The Band after years on the road (and presumably the inevitable fallings out).
Richard Manuel
It's all tied together with the wackiest, oddly-accented most fabulous drum track you've ever heard. Greil Marcus sums it up in Mystery Train (devoting more space to this song than almost any other by The Band): Greil Marcus
Richard Manuel
Line-by-lineDylanologist Michael Gray (Song and Dance Man) makes a distinction between analysis of lyrics (this line echoes a specific line in Genesis 19) and interpretation (I reckon this might have been about a bust in Canada). He favours the former and disparages the latter. I'm afraid this will veer heavily into the latter! The words to "We Can Talk" on the site aren't totally accurate. Some are disputable, some are wrong. I thought it was "echoing AROUND the hall" not "ACROSS the hall" (and the echoing voice sings ROUND rather than AROUND). Greil Marcus, who quotes more of this lyric than any other, heard AROUND too, but others hear it as ALONG. I have my doubts, though AROUND makes more sense. ACROSS, it isn't! "The leaves have turned to chalk" is what it says in the lyrics, but without doubt there's a BECAUSE which isn't transcribed at the start of the line. The words on the site were off sheet music for the first two albums, which questions the veracity of the sheet music. Sheet music in those days was often given to someone else to transcribe and to put in the dots. But even Levon gets the words wrong. In his biography he recalls "rather be burned UP in Canada" but there's no "UP" on the recording. The Band have always switched minor structural words, but while these might be (and are often) wrong on the transcribed lyrics, I'd guess "content words" (such as LEAVES) are more likely to be right. I always heard PLAINS, which makes more sense in the Sodom & Gommorrah context of being turned to salt.
Dave Hopkins
This is one of the older set of songs on Big Pink, conceived in the house, so may well be the first example of the trademark vocal swopping (Levon says they discovered it on Ain't No More Cane, but that was to remain hidden for another seven years.) It's complex, lines swopped, lines completed for someone else - because these are all phrases the listener has heard so often repeated, that he can complete them. Twin keyboards, Garth and Richard, intertwine wonderfully before that resonant THUMP of Levon's drum.
(outtake: yeah) It's that same old riddle only starting from the middle (or Marcus: always starts from the middle ) I'd fix it but I don't know how Well, we could try to reason but you might think it's treason I used to hear from the start to the middle myself, but though outtakes vary, the final version is (I believe) as in the sheet music. You can almost guess the origins of some of the lines. The cool voice of reason (management? Robbie?) being interpreted as 'treason", perhaps. I'd fix it but I don't know how is sung with perfectly appropriate intonation too.
Echoing around the hall Don't give up on Father Clock We can talk about it now
Gene
Father Clock is a nice retake on Old Father Time, so makes some sense to me. It's the kind of reworking of a cliché that would stick in the mind.
Greil Marcus
Which is the point I always come back to whenever I hear it. Whether the myth is bullshit or not (and I suspect it's been well hyped), Band fans love to think of the indominatable band of brothers myth - the one voice for all.
To keep the wheels turnin' you've got to keep the engine churnin' (not on sheet music: Well) Did you ever milk a cow I had the chance one day but I was all dressed up for Sunday To keep the wheel's turnin' is the sort of truism that people tend to say. One Southern English club owner used to amuse visiting bands (unconciously) by always advising the bass player that he should listen to the drummer, as if it was a new idea and a secret. He thought that repeating this (again and again and again) suggested that he had some musical knowledge. The dialogue in Did you ever milk a cow? (from Levon) and I had the chance one day, but I was all dressed up for Sunday (from Rick) makes it sound as if they improvised humorous conversations on the road (which I've heard other musicians do). It's good comic dialogue. Everyone remembers it. With TheBand you can't rule out double entendre but I don't know where.
Do you really care Pick up your heads and walk We can talk about it now
It seems to me we've been holding something
The last line is one that sticks in everyone's minds. I've never felt the need to analyse it before, except that it's a surprise juxtaposition, as normally you associate cold with Canada and heat with the South. On to interpretation, I can imagine the disconsolate and homesick Hawks having a bad time on the Southern circuit, and someone saying "If we were back in Canada now?" (cf. Frank Zappa's "If we'd all been living in California" off Uncle Meat ). Then someone else says, 'Yeah, but the promoters really ripped us off last time ?" (they always do). So, 'I'd rather be burned in Canada than to freeze here in the South,' then the line would be remembered and repeated whenever things went wrong. The other guess about the verse connects to Caledonia Mission (see the article on this site) and the story of the bust in Canada (or maybe Ronnie Hawkins meant this song too / instead). There's even possibly a comic cartoon image (Fabulous Furry Freak Brothers?) of someone hiding a lighted "cigarette" under their tongues and getting slapped on the back. A double meaning of burned comes there. Holding something underneath your tongue could be a newly-coined phrase meaning an interesting variant of holding your tongue i.e. keeping quiet, or something like 'keeping stuff bottled up inside'. A pat on the back could be the comic slap, causing explosive coughing. It could also be 'praise'. A pat on the back is praise, and the result of praise, or of success, means getting swollen up with self-importance to bursting point. But Levon's story of having to use an insufficiently-loaded credit card to buy air tickets to California during the recordings, suggest that at this point they'd not enjoyed either financial reward or any praise. I guess they'd seen enough of it in others. Robbie's guitar does wonderful things throughout this section, and the keyboards fade away to allow his playful, almost mock-psychedelic guitar part to shine through.
We've got to find a sharper blade or have a new one made Rest awhile and cool your brow (Marcus:) Don't you see, there's no need to slave) (Sheet music:) Don't need it. No need to ? (Outtake:) You see there's no need ? The whip is in the grave Pulling that eternal pough fits, though there have been arguments for lonely / holy nights, eternal vow which shows how loose these lyrics seem to be! The only word I'd swear to is eternal. Amanda (from New Zealand)
Yes, there are dark undercurrents, as their humour is dark, but the idea of needing a sharper blade assists with pulling the eternal plough. They're struggling with the 'plough', the response is 'rest awhile, cool your brow.' There's no need to slave, those days are over. Which is what they must have hoped for from the Capitol contract! A whip buried in the grave harks back to slavery days, which are gone. This verse caused Greil Marcus to wax poetic and I agree with his hearing of the lyrics. If you listen to the earlier pressings they are actually clearer than the remaster: Don't you see ? It checks out on the live versions too, where the singing is closer to the microphone. Greil Marcus
It's safe now to take a backward glance Because the ( leaves) have turned to (chalk) (Sheet music:) 'because' is missing We can talk about it now, We can talk about it now jps mentions this verse in the Band guestbook: jps:
From Genesis 19:
It fits with a number of other Biblical references which were used in Band lyrics and mentions both plains and vegetation (which could be leaves). So why have the 'leaves turned to chalk'? Maybe it's because they look like white ash, incinerated in the flash that turned Lot's wife to salt, hanging there for a moment, white. Whether it's flames, plain or leaves probably doesn't matter. It would refer to a weird and catacysmic event in any case.
Dave Hopkins
Little Brother
Diamond Lil
John (New York)
Pehr Smith
I used to be a 'plains have turned to chalk' listener, but after listening to the live Isle of Wight version, I'd say Lil's "flames have turned to char" gets my vote. I'd also say that whatever follows "no salt" doesn't sound anything like "no trance". It's got an "en" or "ain" sound in it. 23 If you think about it, the Biblical reference is NO salt, so it's safe to take a backward glance. So the cataclysm hasn't happened, Lot's wife hasn't been changed to salt, which would naturally lead to the 'flames have turned to char' - they've gone out. Final word:
Barney Hoskyns
VersionsStudio albums
Live albumsIt's not appeared on any of the three official live albums ( Rock of Ages, The Last Waltz, Live at Watkin's Glen ) even though it was performed live in the early years, it was dropped. CompilationsAstonishingly, this song, so highly rated in Mystery Train, Greil Marcus's first critical work on The Band, appears on not one compilation. Not even the three CD box set has room for it. And in spite of his fulsome praise above it isn't even on the Hoskyns-compiled The Shape I'm In: Very Best of the Band.
Dave Hopkins
BootlegsAnd it's missing from the CD bootlegs apart from:
TapesA collectors' tape has been circulating for years (Greil Marcus & Barney Hoskyns had obviously both heard it) which includes thirteen takes of We Can Talk giving a fascinating guide to the recording process. Some of it (takes 2 to 5) appeared in 2000 on the bootleg Old Shoesin awful quality. To my memory, this isn't as good as the tape I heard, and sounds a few generations further down the tape-trading line.* They all play on every take, proving that the song was a 'live in the studio performance'.
Take 1: instrumental
* I've spent an hour looking for this tape, which I annotated as above several years ago. I can even see the label in my mind's eye, but I honestly cannot find it, so don't ask! There are live versions on tape, covering major early concerts. None of them I've heard are clear or well-recorded, which is a shame, as often live versions resolve questions about the exact words of Band songs. From the tape Archive on this site:
As it's not even on the American shows listed in the tape archive for July and August 1971, I assume it was dropped directly after the early summer 1971 European tour. It doesn't seem to have featured in Richard Manuel solo shows either, not that it's possible with fewer than three voices. Cover versionsNone, to my knowledge. Not surprising, considering the lead vocal trading. Footnotes1 Vox magazine October 1991 2 Rolling Stone 27 December 1969 3 Interview, The Woodstock Times, 21 March 1985 4 Greil Marcus 'Mystery Train' 5 Record Collector, Ronnie Hawkins interview, Jan 1987 6 Quoted in 'Dark Star: The Roy Orbison Story' by Ellis Amburn (1990) 7 Levon Helm & Stephen Davies "This Wheel's On Fire" 8 'We Can Talk' © Richard Manuel 9 Quoted in Barney Hoskyns "Across the Great Divide" 10 Greil Marcus 'Mystery Train' 11 Interview, The Woodstock Times, 21 March 1985 12 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000 13 Gene, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000 14 Greil Marcus, Mystery Train 15 Amanda, Band Guestbook, 6 November 2000 16 Greil Marcus, "Mystery Train" 17 jps, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000 18 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000 19 Little Brother, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000 20 Diamond Lil, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000 21 John, New York, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000 22 Pehr Smith, Band Guestbook, 6 November 2000 23 The British Royal Family would prounce 'trance' as 'trence'! 24 Barney Hoskyns, "Across the Great Divide". 25 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000
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