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We Can Talk
The first section "On lyrics in general" is expanded
from a similar section in an earlier article, but it's especially
relevant here.
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![]() Richard Manuel, 1943-1986. Too soon gone. |
Greil Marcus
When the music (on Big Pink) is most
exciting - when the guitar is fighting for space in the clatter while
voices yelp and wail as one man finishes another man's line or spins
it off in a new direction - the lyrics are blind baggage and they
emerge only in snatches. This is the finest rock 'n' roll tradition.
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A tradition, surely. Roy Orbison remembered the words of Mary Lou for Ronnie Hawkins.
Ronnie Hawkins
I couldn't remember all the words
but Roy Orbison who was touring with the Teen Kings, knew the one
verse that I didn't. A couple of months later Roy was driving along
humming that tune and thinking about recording it, when he turned on
the radio and heard me doing it.5
That's the problem with oral history. Ronnie recorded Mary Lou on April 29th 1959. Roy Orbison disbanded The Teen Kings in 1956. Still, Roy recalls the same incident as occurring when he knew Ronnie in Arkansas in 1955:
Roy Orbison
I sang him the song Mary Lou that
he went off and recorded. He made a big hit before I ever made it.6
Lyric swopping was happening all the time with rock songs. When I was at school, and every kid wanted to be in a group, we'd swop lyrics to Stones songs or Chuck Berry songs. You were never quite sure what the words actually were. Take Memphis, Tennessee. The song sheet says that his uncle took the message and he wrote it on the wall. It doesn't sound like that. Most bands in my area voted for 'the phone boy took the message ?'. I once sweated out the words to Route 66 from a detailed atlas while the Stones version cranked tinnily out of the Dansette behind me - and looking back I made a few mistakes even with the atlas. Most British groups just used to mouth meaningless noises - 'See a Murillo, gallop to Mexico, and half of Arizona, don't forget to phone ya, Winston, dumadumdum, Saint Bernadine, oh, what you?' (or crap to that effect). Chuck Berry sang 'Jack, take my way', everybody else, including Mick Jagger, sang 'Just take my way'. And Berry's words were an example of great clarity compared to Little Richard.
Robbie is quite serious when he says he believes lyrics should be part-heard, part-understood. That's the difference between a song and a poem. Good rock is not poetry set to music (however widely you want to define poetry). Rock is something else. Few great songs are transparent in meaning. Many of the best are not-quite-heard. The lyrics throughout Big Pink are considerably less transparent and more fragmented than those on their second album, but this is nothing that needs apologizing for. I've enjoyed the music (and the words) on Big Pink for years without feeling any great compulsion to see them written out, or to puzzle out detailed meanings. The music gives a mood, and the words heighten and enhance it.
This is a perfect opener for side two, in contrast to Tears of Rage on side one, and another Manuel song. Unlike his other compositions, this is tailor made for the ensemble rather than for a lead vocal by himself. The way the lyrics are swopped between singers, and get lost in the general hurly-burly previews what happens on the next track but one, Chest Fever. Rick and Richard are close in to the mics, Levon appears to be around / across / along the hall. The distance between the perceived positions is accentuated on the remasters. The lines are exchanged, finished for each other, then everything suddenly blends together in a line that sums up their finest vocal work:
Manuel's writing here is as dense, complex and enigmatic as Robertson's. We Can Talk defies explanation, yet bursts from the lyrics imprint themselves in the mind:
We've got to find a sharper blade or have a new one made?
There's no need to slave, the whip
is the grave ?8
The song is a series of snatches of conversations; perhaps it's emphasising the eventual cameradie among the members of The Band after years on the road (and presumably the inevitable fallings out).
Richard Manuel
(there's) a whole vocal thing I
wasn't aware we had before. I remember thinking "I really like
this stuff."9
It's all tied together with the wackiest, oddly-accented most fabulous drum track you've ever heard. Greil Marcus sums it up in Mystery Train (devoting more space to this song than almost any other by The Band):
Greil Marcus
.. a Richard Manuel tune that sounds
like the best merry-go-round in the world. Full of exultation,
exhortation, smiles and complaints, it is the song of a man who has
gone far enough to have become part of what he sings about. 'It's
safe now', he says, 'to take a backward glance.' 10
Richard Manuel
The
songs that I wrote myself ... I'd usually have a musical idea and
then I'd give it a theme, an idea to go with it ... like 'We Can
Talk' ... that song ... 'We can talk about it now.'? I just got up
one morning and wrote that song. I got that gospel thing on the
piano. 11
Dylanologist Michael Gray (Song and Dance Man) makes a distinction between analysis of lyrics (this line echoes a specific line in Genesis 19) and interpretation (I reckon this might have been about a bust in Canada). He favours the former and disparages the latter. I'm afraid this will veer heavily into the latter!
The words to "We Can Talk" on the site aren't totally accurate. Some are disputable, some are wrong. I thought it was "echoing AROUND the hall" not "ACROSS the hall" (and the echoing voice sings ROUND rather than AROUND). Greil Marcus, who quotes more of this lyric than any other, heard AROUND too, but others hear it as ALONG. I have my doubts, though AROUND makes more sense. ACROSS, it isn't!
"The leaves have turned to chalk" is what it says in the lyrics, but without doubt there's a BECAUSE which isn't transcribed at the start of the line. The words on the site were off sheet music for the first two albums, which questions the veracity of the sheet music. Sheet music in those days was often given to someone else to transcribe and to put in the dots. But even Levon gets the words wrong. In his biography he recalls "rather be burned UP in Canada" but there's no "UP" on the recording. The Band have always switched minor structural words, but while these might be (and are often) wrong on the transcribed lyrics, I'd guess "content words" (such as LEAVES) are more likely to be right. I always heard PLAINS, which makes more sense in the Sodom & Gommorrah context of being turned to salt.
Dave Hopkins
We Can Talk also gives us all
three voices in equal turns, echoing each other and completing each
other's lines in an extraordinary way (listen to how they all sing
"Do you really care?" at different times with different
cadences - seemingly breaking all the usual rules of popular music
performance - and nail it, perfectly; that's quite a feat!). When
listening to the song again right now, though, I'm struck most of all
by the sheer enthusiasm with which Levon, Rick and Richard belt out
the vocals - so convincingly that I soon stop worrying about who
Father Clock might be or under exactly what circumstances someone
might have his only opportunity to milk a cow, yet be forced to
decline due to a lack of appropriate clothing. Instead, I just sit
back and enjoy it. 12
This is one of the older set of songs on Big Pink, conceived in the house, so may well be the first example of the trademark vocal swopping (Levon says they discovered it on Ain't No More Cane, but that was to remain hidden for another seven years.) It's complex, lines swopped, lines completed for someone else - because these are all phrases the listener has heard so often repeated, that he can complete them.
Twin keyboards, Garth and Richard, intertwine wonderfully before that resonant THUMP of Levon's drum.
I used to hear from the start to the middle myself, but though outtakes vary, the final version is (I believe) as in the sheet music. You can almost guess the origins of some of the lines. The cool voice of reason (management? Robbie?) being interpreted as 'treason", perhaps. I'd fix it but I don't know how is sung with perfectly appropriate intonation too.
Gene
I always hear, "Don't give up
on 5 o'clock...", not "on Father Clock..." 13
Father Clock is a nice retake on Old Father Time, so makes some sense to me. It's the kind of reworking of a cliché that would stick in the mind.
Greil Marcus
For its moment, the song - a free and friendly conversation
between the men in the Band and anyone who might care to listen - is
that one voice.14
Which is the point I always come back to whenever I hear it. Whether the myth is bullshit or not (and I suspect it's been well hyped), Band fans love to think of the indominatable band of brothers myth - the one voice for all.
To keep the wheel's turnin' is the sort of truism that people tend to say. One Southern English club owner used to amuse visiting bands (unconciously) by always advising the bass player that he should listen to the drummer, as if it was a new idea and a secret. He thought that repeating this (again and again and again) suggested that he had some musical knowledge.
The dialogue in Did you ever milk a cow? (from Levon) and I had the chance one day, but I was all dressed up for Sunday (from Rick) makes it sound as if they improvised humorous conversations on the road (which I've heard other musicians do). It's good comic dialogue. Everyone remembers it. With TheBand you can't rule out double entendre but I don't know where.
It seems to me we've been holding something
underneath our tongues
I'm afraid if you ever got a pat on the back
It would likely burst your lungs
Woh, stop me, if I should sound kinda down in the
mouth
But I'd rather be burned in Canada than to freeze
here in the south
The last line is one that sticks in everyone's minds. I've never felt the need to analyse it before, except that it's a surprise juxtaposition, as normally you associate cold with Canada and heat with the South. On to interpretation, I can imagine the disconsolate and homesick Hawks having a bad time on the Southern circuit, and someone saying "If we were back in Canada now?" (cf. Frank Zappa's "If we'd all been living in California" off Uncle Meat ). Then someone else says, 'Yeah, but the promoters really ripped us off last time ?" (they always do). So, 'I'd rather be burned in Canada than to freeze here in the South,' then the line would be remembered and repeated whenever things went wrong.
The other guess about the verse connects to Caledonia Mission (see the article on this site) and the story of the bust in Canada (or maybe Ronnie Hawkins meant this song too / instead). There's even possibly a comic cartoon image (Fabulous Furry Freak Brothers?) of someone hiding a lighted "cigarette" under their tongues and getting slapped on the back. A double meaning of burned comes there. Holding something underneath your tongue could be a newly-coined phrase meaning an interesting variant of holding your tongue i.e. keeping quiet, or something like 'keeping stuff bottled up inside'. A pat on the back could be the comic slap, causing explosive coughing. It could also be 'praise'. A pat on the back is praise, and the result of praise, or of success, means getting swollen up with self-importance to bursting point. But Levon's story of having to use an insufficiently-loaded credit card to buy air tickets to California during the recordings, suggest that at this point they'd not enjoyed either financial reward or any praise. I guess they'd seen enough of it in others.
Robbie's guitar does wonderful things throughout this section, and the keyboards fade away to allow his playful, almost mock-psychedelic guitar part to shine through.
Pulling that eternal pough fits, though there have been arguments for lonely / holy nights, eternal vow which shows how loose these lyrics seem to be! The only word I'd swear to is eternal.
Amanda (from New Zealand)
One of my favourite lines from the song is "Well we could try
to reason. But you might think it's treason". I also like "It
seems to me if you ever got a pat on the back it would likely burst
your lungs" and "We've got to find a sharper blade or have
a new one made"...There really is a dark undercurrent going
through that song despite the humour and the joyous way they sing it.
But thats true of most folk and blues music and of life as well when
ya think about it15
Yes, there are dark undercurrents, as their humour is dark, but the idea of needing a sharper blade assists with pulling the eternal plough. They're struggling with the 'plough', the response is 'rest awhile, cool your brow.' There's no need to slave, those days are over. Which is what they must have hoped for from the Capitol contract! A whip buried in the grave harks back to slavery days, which are gone.
This verse caused Greil Marcus to wax poetic and I agree with his hearing of the lyrics. If you listen to the earlier pressings they are actually clearer than the remaster: Don't you see ? It checks out on the live versions too, where the singing is closer to the microphone.
Greil Marcus
The song creates out of words and
music, a big, open, undeniable image of what the country could sound
like at its best, of what it could feel like. One good burst of rock
& roll blows the trail clean ? "Dontcha see" he shouts
in an extraordinary flash of vision, that seems to reveal the secret
America holds, even as it hints at deeper secrets, "there's no
need to slave."
"The whip" he sings "is
in the grave."16
jps mentions this verse in the Band guestbook:
jps:
Now without the listing, I wouldn't have even heard salt, trance
or backward glance. The best I could hear in the next line was "The
fleas have turned to Cha". But now that I hear it it looks like
a biblical reference to Lot, his wife and daughters leaving Sodom and
Gomorrah. I couldn't hear "leaves" but thought I heard
"plains" or "flames" They all seem to fit in the
context of:
From Genesis 19:
Flee for your lives! Don't look back, and don't stop anywhere
in the plain! Flee to the mountains or you will be swept away!".....
Then the LORD rained down burning
sulfur on Sodom and Gomorrah--from the LORD out of the heavens. Thus
he overthrew those cities and the entire plain, including all those
living in the cities--and also the vegetation in the land. But Lot's
wife looked back, and she became a pillar of salt.17
It fits with a number of other Biblical references which were used in Band lyrics and mentions both plains and vegetation (which could be leaves). So why have the 'leaves turned to chalk'? Maybe it's because they look like white ash, incinerated in the flash that turned Lot's wife to salt, hanging there for a moment, white. Whether it's flames, plain or leaves probably doesn't matter. It would refer to a weird and catacysmic event in any case.
Dave Hopkins
It's funny how we hear lyrics
differently...I've always heard "echoing ALONG the hall"
and "the FLAMES have turned to chalk." Listening to the
song again, I still think that's what I hear, but due to the
discussion I'm less sure than before!18
Little Brother
I hear "ALONG the hall". And isn't it "the FLAMES have
turned to chalk"? Indeed, it's one of those ambiguous sonic
moments where the harder one strains to listen, the more elusive the
referent gets. I just tried a few times, and all I'm sure of is an
"...ain..." sound. Or is that "ane"19
Diamond Lil
Here's another vote for FLAMES in
We Can Talk.... except I always thought it was "The
flames have turned to char.' Makes more sense than chalk . And my
favorite line in that tune? "I'd fix it but I don't know how".
Everyone, at least once a day, knows what that feels like. I know I
sure do. 20
John (New York)
I truly believe that it is 'PLAINS have turned to chalk'. If only
the booklet that comes with the album had the lyrics.21
Pehr Smith
I think the We Can Talk line is The flames have turned to
chalk- I think its a reference to Sodom and Gommorah, when Sarah
turned back to see the leveling against the orders of God not to turn
back she turned into a pillar of salt.22
I used to be a 'plains have turned to chalk' listener, but after listening to the live Isle of Wight version, I'd say Lil's "flames have turned to char" gets my vote. I'd also say that whatever follows "no salt" doesn't sound anything like "no trance". It's got an "en" or "ain" sound in it. 23
If you think about it, the Biblical reference is NO salt, so it's safe to take a backward glance. So the cataclysm hasn't happened, Lot's wife hasn't been changed to salt, which would naturally lead to the 'flames have turned to char' - they've gone out.
Final word:
Barney Hoskyns
The song stands as one of The Band's
masterworks, a breathless call-and-response yelp of sanctified joy. ?
Self-deprecating as (Richard Manuel) later was about his talents as
a lyricist, "We Can Talk" was as good in its humorously
cryptic way as anything Robbie ever wrote.24
It's not appeared on any of the three official live albums ( Rock of Ages, The Last Waltz, Live at Watkin's Glen ) even though it was performed live in the early years, it was dropped.
Astonishingly, this song, so highly rated in Mystery Train, Greil Marcus's first critical work on The Band, appears on not one compilation. Not even the three CD box set has room for it. And in spite of his fulsome praise above it isn't even on the Hoskyns-compiled The Shape I'm In: Very Best of the Band.
Dave Hopkins
We Can Talk is never really
held up as a famous or classic song; perusing the discography, I
don't see it on any of the major compilations. However, my own
personal impression from reading this Guestbook regularly is that
it's a real sentimental favorite among those who post here, and I
always include it on any tape I make of Band material. One reason for
its popularity may be that it virtually stands alone as an uptempo,
extroverted, even fun song from a composer known more for his
serious, introspective ballads. Of course, I don't mean to slight
Richard's other work by this comment; I'm just trying to point out
that I think we enjoy hearing something different...and there are
precious few Manuel compositions to choose from. 25
Take 1: instrumental
Take 2: false start
Take 3: A bit ragged - cut off by John
Simon because of Rick's mic popping & also for Robbie to retune
slightly
Take 4: False start "Sloppy!"
shouts Simon
Take 5: Complete - OK until Rick's mic
pops in last verse
Take 6: Complete - Simon asks for one
more
Take 7: false start
Take 8: Complete - Simon says this one
is 'Getting there'
Take 9: false start - Robbie is accused
of turning his volume up.
Take 10: Pretty soon breaks up into
crackle
Take 11: false start - Simon is getting
irritable, Garth has a 'heavy toe'
Take 12: further dissolves into crackle
Take 13: Complete 'that was really
close'
* I've spent an hour looking for this tape, which I annotated as above several years ago. I can even see the label in my mind's eye, but I honestly cannot find it, so don't ask!
There are live versions on tape, covering major early concerts. None of them I've heard are clear or well-recorded, which is a shame, as often live versions resolve questions about the exact words of Band songs.
From the tape Archive on this site:
As it's not even on the American shows listed in the tape archive for July and August 1971, I assume it was dropped directly after the early summer 1971 European tour. It doesn't seem to have featured in Richard Manuel solo shows either, not that it's possible with fewer than three voices.
None, to my knowledge. Not surprising, considering the lead vocal trading.
1 Vox magazine October 1991
2 Rolling Stone 27 December 1969
3 Interview, The Woodstock Times, 21 March 1985
4 Greil Marcus 'Mystery Train'
5 Record Collector, Ronnie Hawkins interview, Jan 1987
6 Quoted in 'Dark Star: The Roy Orbison Story' by Ellis Amburn (1990)
7 Levon Helm & Stephen Davies "This Wheel's On Fire"
8 'We Can Talk' © Richard Manuel
9 Quoted in Barney Hoskyns "Across the Great Divide"
10 Greil Marcus 'Mystery Train'
11 Interview, The Woodstock Times, 21 March 1985
12 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000
13 Gene, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000
14 Greil Marcus, Mystery Train
15 Amanda, Band Guestbook, 6 November 2000
16 Greil Marcus, "Mystery Train"
17 jps, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000
18 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000
19 Little Brother, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000
20 Diamond Lil, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000
21 John, New York, Band Guestbook, 5 November 2000
22 Pehr Smith, Band Guestbook, 6 November 2000
23 The British Royal Family would prounce 'trance' as 'trence'!
24 Barney Hoskyns, "Across the Great Divide".
25 Dave Hopkins, Band Guestbook, 4 November 2000